Negative Effects of Technology

I need an argumentive essay on technology having negative effects on children and schools. I have attached the professor′s instructions on how she wants it written. Please read carefully. I also attached 4 images of notes she has given us. Things like having repeated words at the beginning of sentences or using dead words, I can′t have that on my essay or she will take points off. Please look at the notes carefully. Cite sources and MLA format please.